Thursday, April 15, 2010

quote response 4-15-10

"Yo, Tina! Get over here!" slowly she walked towards us, then took one look at Old Crow and threw up again. "When your finished barfing you f****** stomach out, I need you to hold on to Old Crow. Hurry up!"
ch. 2 pg. 40

this whole thing is really intresting because it makes you feel like you were there watching everything unfold which is really great writing with the dialogue. Its great and i thought i would write this because since we just finished with the whole dialogue section of our class.
Dialogue makes a story feel more. and through out the book theres plenty of dialogue.

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